Last Week (Démie)

Ok, so I've worked all day on this to push it further before our last session with the model

Here's where I'm at:

week 9 progress

i gave up and started working in greyscale....

Week 9 - Stéphanie

J'ai modifié la silhouette pour les avants bras et les jambes et j'ai commencé à définir mieux l'armure et la chevelure. 

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Week 8 - Stéphanie

I filled the base color and since everything was getting close to pitch black I lightened the background around the figure. 

Week 7 - Stéphanie

I worked on the pistol and the pants more. Here is what I have after the third week.

Week 06 (Démie)

So, I did work "a little" on the pirate during the week.

This is what I have showed to Mr Vinh on Monday. 

We talked about composition and the fact that the curtains were too regular and like 3 "same size" masses, and also how the pants and the sleeves are too pale. Though the sleeves are at 30% value, it still appears almost white, because the rest is so dark...

So here, I did a resize of the frame and pushed the curtains inward; I gave a little angle to the yellowish one, to cut the "linear/same shape" mass on the back. I also darken the pants and the sleeves, and started some folding details. The face is not finished yet and because I made major corrections between week 5 and 6, the whole size of the head is not too small; I'll correct that when all will be done and all my different layers of lights & shadows will be merged.

Still so far from finished; any comment to make it better / correct weak parts are welcome!