So, I did work "a little" on the pirate during the week.
This is what I have showed to Mr Vinh on Monday.
We talked about composition and the fact that the curtains were too regular and like 3 "same size" masses, and also how the pants and the sleeves are too pale. Though the sleeves are at 30% value, it still appears almost white, because the rest is so dark...
So here, I did a resize of the frame and pushed the curtains inward; I gave a little angle to the yellowish one, to cut the "linear/same shape" mass on the back. I also darken the pants and the sleeves, and started some folding details. The face is not finished yet and because I made major corrections between week 5 and 6, the whole size of the head is not too small; I'll correct that when all will be done and all my different layers of lights & shadows will be merged.
Still so far from finished; any comment to make it better / correct weak parts are welcome!
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