Tuesday, 30 January 2018

Feedback: Mauricio, Stéphanie

HI Mauricio, the position of the shoes indicate that the horizon line is very low, the '' camera"" is almost at the floor level, then you can not have one foot in front of the other and right now It looks like she has the right leg longer than the left one. To get the effect you want, the camera should be at the higher level and looking down to the two boots ( See A), the perspective has the horizon line higher.
- Also you need to readjust the  shape of  the body, 2 legs and shorten left arm.



Hi Steph, The pose looks good, the head is nice. Just some adjustment for better contour of the figure. Ideally the right food should rotate more to the right for more natural pose but you may keep the actual angle as it is  too. We'll talk together later about your thumbnails.


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